Talk:Robert Montgomery (artist)

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Nataliewarther. Peer reviewers: Wikibicki.

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Looking good
Looking good! I did some copyediting. Next steps could include more categories, and making sure it's not a Orphan. Also, is it normal for artist bios to list all of the exhibitions like that? -Reagle (talk) 18:20, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Reagle Thanks! I will link my page from other pages and add some more categories. I have seen the exhibitions listed that in one other place, but it seems a bit excessive. I'll consider cutting it down! --Nataliewarther (talk) 20:02, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

Hi Natalie! I just went through and peer-reviewed your article, and so far great job! I agree with the idea of changing the way the exhibitions are listed, maybe a chart or something would organize them better? I looked up some of his work and it is really interesting, I wonder if there's a picture that could be ok to use with the copyright license. Overall against the perfect article rubric yours looks very good! Good job so far and good luck in finishing up! Smfredd (talk) 18:03, 11 November 2015 (UTC)

Nataliewarther I really enjoyed learning about Robert Montgomery on your page! I went through and peer-reviewed your article; just a few small grammatical adjustments and I linked to the Wikipedia page that details the student protests in France that you mention. My only other comment would be that you link to the situationist page several times throughout the article but when I went to the page to find information regarding the melancholic post-situationist tradition that Montgomery worked in I couldn't find it. Maybe consider adding a small section to the situationist page regarding this style if you have information about it from your research on Montgomery. Overall, great work! Wikibicki (talk) 17:15, 23 November 2015 (UTC)