Talk:Robert Mugabe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: My name is not dave (talk · contribs) 19:07, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Immediate failure check

 * Copyright violations -- nothing of concern.
 * Any pressing tags on the article -- nothing of concern.
 * Edit wars? -- nothing of concern.

Lede
Overall: Pass

Early life
Overall: Pass
 * After reading the section below, I see that the University of London is referred to as London University. I don't believe this is the standard way to express the university's name and I see no indication that it was the historical name at the time of Mugabe's graduation. My name is not dave (talk/contribs) 17:19, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
 * I have come across the term "London University" before, although it does appear that "University of London" is more correct and thus I shall amend this in the article. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:59, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Revolutionary activity
Overall: Pass

Prime Minister of Zimbabwe
Overall: Pass.

President of Zimbabwe
Overall: Pass.

Ideology
Overall: Pass.

Personal life
Overall: Pass

Reception and legacy
Overall: Pass

Overall
I am putting this on hold, as there are a few issues that need to be resolved. Most are not urgent, but one is -- the problem with the election stating that it was held in March, when the election page stated that it was held in February. My name is not dave (talk/contribs) 11:53, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking on this review, My name is not dave . I hope that you gained some interest from reading through the article. I think that I have responded to each or your comments; you may wish to counter-respond on a few points before moving forward with the review. Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:47, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
 * No worries. Going forward, it would be good to see this as a featured article. All in all it looks ready for such a feat, there could be a small reduction in article size, it is at 86k and is 13,595 words long, but this is a well-made article. My name is not dave (talk/contribs) 09:34, 4 November 2017 (UTC)