Talk:Robert Thomas (ice hockey)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "As the youngest player on the Blues' roster, Thomas won the Stanley Cup as a member of the team in 2019." Remove "as a member of the team", it's already stated with him being on the roster.✅
 * Ref 2 doesn't say his dad is a chef.✅
 * "under 16" Dash needed.✅
 * Link Fortnite and link Jordan Kyrou earlier.✅
 * "attend Canada men's national junior ice hockey team U20 Team Summer Development Camp " A "the" can be added after the "and".
 * What and? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:07, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Err, I mean "attend". Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  16:47, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Blues prospects Jordan Kyrou" Singular. ✅
 * Missing a dot for the ellipsis in the player profile quote.✅

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)