Talk:Robert W. Hayler/Archive 1

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 * NH 93019 Rear Admiral Robert Ward Hayler, USN.jpg
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 * NH 94102 Rear Admiral Robert W. Hayler, USN.jpg

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The grammar and syntax are awful
This reads like a straight lift from Navy reports. Missing prepositions, adjectives and adverbs. Needs considerable cleaning up.Grendel532 (talk) 04:12, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I have tried to address these justified concerns.
 * Dieter.Meinertzhagen (talk) 17:45, 1 February 2022 (UTC)