Talk:Robert William Fisher/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a WP:DATECOMMA after "April 13, 1961".
 * "William Fisher, a banker, and mother, Jan Howell" – reword
 * Remove the comma after "in California".
 * "As of April 2003, FBI had" "By April 2003, the FBI had"
 * "as as firefighter" "as a firefighter"
 * Archive sources (you can use this).
 * References #12 and #13 should be properly cited.
 * That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:24, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Hello . I've finished with most of this. I have added the tool to archive sources from my account, but I don't know how to use it. Is there a need for sources to be archived? I don't think it's required. Everything else is done. Display name 99 (talk) 14:42, 23 July 2021 (UTC)