Talk:Robert of Bath/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 02:56, 19 January 2021 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(t &#183; c)  buidhe  03:06, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Prose comments below
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * I checked some of the references and found no issues with verifiability or plagiarism.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * No images, presumably because none are available
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Just two minor comments below, otherwise it definitely meets the GA criteria. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  03:06, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "He was the bishop that organized the archdeacons of the diocese on a territorial basis." does that mean he reorganized the archdeacons to operate on a territorial basis? If so, this could be more clear
 * Let's try "He was the bishop that set up the territorial organization of the archdeacons of the diocese." Is that better? Ealdgyth (talk) 13:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "Robert also built at Bath" what does this mean?
 * Is "Robert continued the building work on church building at Bath," better? Ealdgyth (talk) 13:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Let's try "He was the bishop that set up the territorial organization of the archdeacons of the diocese." Is that better? Ealdgyth (talk) 13:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "Robert also built at Bath" what does this mean?
 * Is "Robert continued the building work on church building at Bath," better? Ealdgyth (talk) 13:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 * just checking in... Ealdgyth (talk) 16:29, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I managed to miss your comments. I am satisfied and will pass it now. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  23:02, 31 January 2021 (UTC)