Talk:Robert of Cricklade/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 16:50, 19 March 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:50, 19 March 2013 (UTC)

Initial comments
This looks very solid on first pass: well written, well sourced, and ripe for promotion. It's brief, but checks of Google Books and Scholar show there's clearly not much out there on the subject. I made some tweaks to the prose for small issues (a minor redundancy, a sentence where a clause didn't match the subject, a sentence that had dashes-within-dashes, etc.) Please feel free to revert anywhere you disagree, and take a look that I didn't accidentally introduce any errors.