Talk:Roberta M. Feldman

Promotional or Advertising copy in this article
I find this namespace reads entirely like a promotional or puff piece. The language (if I may) needs to be neutral and objective, and everything has to be sources properly verified and qualitative. Verifiability would be a good read about verifiable sources needed.

Please take some time to find verifiable sources and find a way to write the page more objectively. There are many articles on how to write these namespaces. Adverts Neutral point of view are some good starts that I read to get started.

happy writing. 8barzmusic (talk) 20:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)