Talk:Roberto Cabral del Hoyo

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I went through and did what I could, but I was having trouble making sense of a lot of it. If someone gets some of the parts, please contribute a little to make it work. I didn't want to take out or change important information just because I couldn't understand. There was also parts that just jumped around, like not mentioning that his father died (which I assume) and just mentioning the consequences of this. Leefkrust22 (talk) 08:04, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
 * TY for your work! We usually refer to the subject of the article by their last name, not their first, btw. — Jeraphine Gryphon  (talk) 08:08, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I also had some trouble editing and understanding this. I can update this to the guy's last name. Is it Cabral del Hoyo? Or just Hoyo? Tripnoted (talk) 05:04, 20 March 2012 (UTC)