Talk:Robin Hood tax/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LT910001 (talk · contribs) 10:50, 17 October 2013 (UTC)

If there are no objections, I'll take this review. I'll note at the outset I've had no role in editing or creating this article. I welcome other editors at any state to contribute to this review. I will begin this review in two days, familiarising myself with the article and then provide an assessment. Kind regards, LT910001 (talk) 10:50, 17 October 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for waiting. In conducting this review, I will:
 * Provide an assessment using WP:GARC
 * If this article does not meet the criteria, explain what areas need improvement.

Commentary
This article could be improved by linking the prose together discursively, significantly trimming the prose size, removing the copyright-flagged image, and altering sources, and indicating dates of access of sources. I would also suggest
 * Rename this article to "Robin Hood tax (UK campaigning group)", or another disambiguating title, in order to help define this article's scope, and removing much of the FTT information. I feel that the ambiguity of scope is a significant factor in the problems mentioned earlier regarding quality.

I apologise on behalf of other reviewers for the length delay between nomination and review, and am happy to provide extra feedback. Given the length delay, I'll wait for a response (maximum two weeks!) before closing this review. Kind regards, LT910001 (talk) 13:23, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
 * With no response and some time constraints on my part, I've closed this review. I'd encourage renomination when the above issues are addressed. The WP:peer review process may be used to get feedback when editing the article. LT910001 (talk) 09:38, 24 October 2013 (UTC)