Talk:Robotomy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 22:01, 7 October 2014 (UTC)

I'll review. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:01, 7 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks! 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend) 22:22, 7 October 2014 (UTC)

Infobox
 * There are definitely adventure elements, are there... action I can see from this article, but without reading the episode summaries, I'm not seeing evidence in this article.
 * Removed—don't know how that got in there either. 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend)
 * A drama film's article stood on Wikipedia as a comedy, until I corrected it a few months ago; it happens.

Lead
 * A little reword here.
 * Thank you. 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend)
 * "is regarded as the shortest-running show on the network": there's no definitive answer?
 * Though only one source mentions this it seems pretty definite to me compared to all other original series on the network; rephrased. 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend)

Plot
 * "typically dating"... is he seeing other female robots in some episodes?
 * Not that I've seen; rephrased. 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend)
 * "; he is typically dating Maimy to Thrasher's disdain." --> "; to Thrasher's disdain, he is dating Maimy."
 * Done; thanks. 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend)

Production
 * The fact that Cartoon Network contacted Buckley, and kept bringing the duo in sounds like he had a good track record. Was he a showrunner before?
 * Incredibly, this is his only television credit. He's an author by profession; should I include this somewhere? 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend)

Passes Checklinks. Passing External links.

There's more for me to review, but here's a bit. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:47, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments! 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend) 18:45, 12 October 2014 (UTC)


 * I've reworded a bit of the Production section, but mainly it was reordering a few sentences of the last two paragraphs, to get all the design comments and all the design comments together. The article seems to be in good shape now, so GA! --  Zanimum (talk) 18:14, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry for this late reply. You're copy edits make it look much better—thanks so much for taking the time to review this! 23W (talk · [ stalk] · pend) 02:29, 15 October 2014 (UTC)