Talk:Rochor MRT station/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:15, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments First pass done. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:21, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * First up I looked at GA1 and the principle issue was with copyvio, so first up I ran Earwig and it looks good, so I think that issue has been satisfactorily addressed in general.
 * "construction of the station began in 2009. The construction of the station" repetitive.
 * Link for Rochor Canal?
 * Lead feels a little bit short, I would add a sentence or two more about the challenges of the construction, the ridership perhaps and the artwork.
 * "Bus, Taxi" -> Bus, taxi"
 * "Disabled access" yes in the infobox, not noted in the prose or referenced.
 * Depth of "26m" (should be spaced/converted) where is this referenced and mentioned in the prose?
 * I would expect to see ridership in the article as well as the infobox.
 * " $803.3 " which dollar?
 * "1.6 million" add a non-breaking space.
 * "as Church - Our Lady of L'des," en-dash.
 * "other DTL Stage 2 stations." you already abbreviated that to DTL2.
 * "the Downtown line (DTL) and" already abbreviated...
 * "of January 2021. the" comma, not.
 * What're "headways"?
 * "ceiling motif is inspired by the interior" sounds like a brochure.
 * "The spaciousness of the layout allows ease of movement" I would suggest you stick to encyclopedic tone, e.g. "designed to allow ease of movement"
 * "To draw the artwork, the students bought vintage objects.." not sure what that first clause is saying, the students bought vintage objects to draw, not the other way round.
 * Addressed the points above. Removed on 26m, cos I am not sure where did the number come from originally. Also, I thought as you go into the next section, you have to abbreviate again, so that's why for Downtown line (DTL). Should I actually just leave it as DTL"--ZKang123 (talk) 02:59, 14 March 2021 (UTC)