Talk:Rock Road massacre

Michigan's largest mass murders
Press accounts describe the Rock Road massacre as the third largest mass murder in Michigan history. It appears to be tied for third largest. The following are the largest on record: 1. Bath school disaster, May 18, 1927 - Andrew Kehoe detonated bombs at a school killing 43 and wounding 58 2. Hazelwood massacre, June 14, 1971 - eight persons shot and killed at an alleged drug house in Detroit 3. (tie) Rock Road massacre - seven killed near Farwell, Michigan 3. (tie) Harry Belcher, January 25, 1965 - Harry Belcher set fire to his Ferndale house, killing his wife and six children 3. (tie) Troy axe murders, September 29, 1964 - After being released from a mental hospital, former Royal Oak fireman William Gravlin killed his wife and six kids, using an axe and a hammer at the family home in Troy. Cbl62 (talk) 05:17, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Written in unencyclopaedic style
"...described as fat with red locks"; "where he played chess and lifted weights..."

This entire article is written very unencyclopaedically 2402:E280:3D6B:5DB:3181:DECE:2CB7:58A7 (talk) 14:43, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Cbl62 (talk) 15:47, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Citations not supporting claims
There are several citations in this Wikipedia page that do not support claims written for this subject. 167.73.209.198 (talk) 14:32, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Can you be specific? Cbl62 (talk) 14:38, 31 October 2022 (UTC)