Talk:Rock Show (Parks and Recreation)/GA1

GA Review
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-- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  15:18, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed most of your concerns here. I dropped the dashes altogether (somebody else made them into a list that didn't really work) and simply changed it to a sentence with commas, let me know if that works for you. I am at work so I can't drop the resolution on the photo from here, but I can easily do that when I get home. Regarding the sentence, "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", can you give me some feedback as to what you want me to do with it? I think it seems pretty clear right now; the guy is the only one without a date at the concern, so he's bummed out. If you can tell me what's unclear I will change it. Thanks for the review! —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  18:28, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Its fine regarding the Cultural references section. Well, do the resolution thing, cause I don't want to get in trouble with the article getting delisted, cause it'll hurt you, than it would me. Okay, the sentence "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", its missing "he" between "because" and "is", cause if you don't have that there, the sentence just reads awkwardly. That's just me. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  19:05, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nope, you were totally right, I was just missing it. Fixed that, and the photo. Thanks! —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  02:12, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, cause I was feeling dumb during all this. But, I'm glad you agree. :) Overall, everything checks out. Thank you to Hunter K. for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  14:28, 18 June 2009 (UTC)