Talk:Rocket Mania!

Article clean-up
Someone wrote this article in a very sloppy tone, so I took my sweet time to correct it (being a Rocket Mania player myself). 09:28, 14 May 2007 (UTC) -- (White Mage Cid)
 * I don't agree that the original tone was "sloppy". In general, I would say that "sloppy" prose contains spelling and grammatical errors, or otherwise fails to make sense.  The tone was properly WP:NPOV and did not use any first or second person references.  In any case, further edits can often help to improve an article's clarity.  --Slordak 17:11, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
 * By "sloppy" I meant to say the factual accuracy was off somewhat. 10:33, 20 May 2007 (UTC) White Mage Cid