Talk:Rod Stryker

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I wonder if just editing can bring this up to standards. it might be better to start with organization. Look for instance, at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swami_Satchidananda, not as a specific model but as an example of breaking things up.

The prominence of "The Four Desires" is perhaps the most "advertising" element. I think it would be better to build of the last line in the article could be something like "Books, Articles and Media"  and there list all his work, the book of course, but CDs etc. If the book already has an IBSN number, simply list that and let the curious do a search on Amazon to find out that it will be in print shortly. BTW, are they actually cited by a source as "bestselling"? If so, cite it, otherwise delete. Something doesn't have to be "bestselling" to be worthwhile.

I'm deleting the first name reference in the last line, its too familiar for an encyclopedia article.

this is great, thanks for the advice. i'm very new to editing in wiki and am trying to make this entry better. many thanks! missmia 15:34, 19 May 2011 (UTC) mia —Preceding unsigned comment added by Missmia (talk • contribs)