Talk:Rodrigo (musician)

Repetitive
I have done a small copyedit to the article, but I think it needs a major trimming; much of the information in the earlier paragraphs is merely repeated later on - one of them needs to go or it makes a dull read.  Brookie :) { - he's in the building somewhere!}  (Whisper...) 15:13, 23 April 2013 (UTC)


 * "Much of the information" is repeated on the first paragraph because it is a summary of the article according to Manual of Style/Lead section ("The lead serves as an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important aspects. [...] The lead should be able to stand alone as a concise overview. It should define the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points—including any prominent controversies")
 * I removed the "citation needed" from the lead. Citations ("Complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations; others, few or none. The presence of citations in the introduction is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article.")--Rod840 (talk) 20:36, 23 April 2013 (UTC)