Talk:Roman Josi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 1TWO3Writer (talk · contribs) 11:49, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

Part of August 2023 backlog. Good luck.

Spot-check

 * (48) Is 26:22 in minutes? Hours?
 * Minutes. Fixed in article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:58, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Discussion

 * Thanks for the review ! Since the Preds did not make the 2023 Stanley Cup playoffs, nothing really has happened since the season ended. However, I will add a couple sentences about how he finished (ie. pts). I will also add refs in the refs section of the awards table. I will also work on expanding/tweaking the lead.HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
 * No problem, my main issue really though is the big paragraphs, so if you also work on that with all other improvements that'd be great! 123Writer talk 15:35, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
 * @HickoryOughtShirt?4 Pinging just in case. 123Writer talk 15:38, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
 * , will do! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:57, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
 * @HickoryOughtShirt?4 I've taken the liberty to break down the paragraphs for you. Are you happy with those changes? 123Writer talk 13:06, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
 * , yes thank you! I'm still not happy with the lead and I realized the international section also needs some work. Is there anything else you have come across? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:38, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
 * No, not at least from a quick re-read. I'll pass the article but feel free to make any further improvements. Good job. 123Writer talk 15:46, 26 August 2023 (UTC)