Talk:Roman temple of Bziza/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:13, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a
 * 1.b
 * 2
 * 2.a
 * 2.b
 * 2.c
 * 2.d
 * 3
 * 3.a
 * 3.b
 * 4
 * 4.a
 * 5
 * 5.a
 * 6
 * 6.a
 * 6.b
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅ (Suggest using Wayback Machine to archive all the urls due to high dependence upon them for sources.)
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

Lede

 * Suggest expanding lede with information, possibly from the history or architecture section; the bit about stamps could definitely be included in the lede. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:22, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

Azizos

 * and Monimos was equated with Hermes suggest mentioning a few of the domains of Hermes, as you did with Ares; possibly, and Monimos was equated with Hermes, the Greek god of traders and merchants.

History

 * Roman hegemony over the region was still in the process of consolidation suggest Roman hegemony over the region was still being consolidated

Location and classification

 * Should explain the authority of George F. Taylor, i.e. George F. Taylor, a [nationality] [occupation], categorized.

Architecture and description

 * The now lost pediment used to measure 8.5 metres (28 ft) by 3 metres (9.8 ft). suggest The now lost pediment measured 8.5 metres (28 ft) by 3 metres (9.8 ft).


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:22, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * thank you for your review and your precious input. I'll make the necessary changes based on your review as soon as I can. ~ Elias Z. (talkallam) 18:19, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * ✔️ Archiving of links
 * ✔️ Lead expand
 * ✔️ Expand on Hermes / Monimos
 * ✔️ CE suggestion of the Roman hegemony passage
 * ✔️Who is George F. Taylor
 * ✔️ CE of ...The now lost pediment measured...
 * I will get to the other recommendations when I have some time. Thanks again ~ Elias Z. (talkallam) 09:02, 13 September 2019 (UTC)