Talk:Ron St. Angelo

Multiple issues tags
I'm trying to see what specifically does someone view as an error so the specific thing can be fixed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alexanderbelice (talk • contribs)
 * This does not specifically require an administrator, so I have made your comment a standard help request. 331dot (talk) 08:22, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Added heading. Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 14:47, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
 * the advertisement template is there because it reads like a resume, not an independent, neutral article. The close connection template is there because it appears that you have a close connection to the subject of the article. Sam-2727 (talk) 15:32, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
 * My apologies this is my first article, I just did a little research. Since I live in Dallas, Texas, Ron St. Angelo is a big deal in this area and to the Dallas Cowboys organization. I figured it should be factual. I can take out what may seem like opinionated statements, but all of this is factual. If it sounds like an advertisement that's just my Master's in English coming through, I don't know any other way to communicate.  He's not a friend of mine, he's just a big deal where I'm from and to sports photography. With respect, All of the information has been researched and factual. I can remove some of the celebs if need be... what is needed to get the tag removed?
 * (courtesy ping) not sure about the tags, but footnotes/inline citations would help. Easiest way is probably adding  after the sentences they support. Then, others can more easily verify the info instead of scratching their heads at a list of sources. Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 16:15, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
 * What more do I need to do to remove the warnings on this article? I'm a Marine, just tell me what I need to do please so I can get it done. Also what do I do if some of these references are not located on the web because it's old.
 * add inline citations. Pick one style and stick with it; I suggest harvnb. Offline refs simply need enough information that someone could theoretically walk into a library and find the information the source supports. Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 08:43, 21 August 2020 (UTC)

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