Talk:Ronnie Rocket/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:52, 28 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox: Rather than write a note in the infobox, why not create a notes section, and put the "both attached at different times" note, etc. there. It does kind of make the infobox look messy.
 * Seems needless complicated, it's just an explanatory aside and the box isn't particularly cluttered. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Overview: "another hallmark Lynch's writings". Huh.
 * "hallmark of" now. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Overview: "had been" → "were"
 * Fixed on both instances. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Background: "Lynch" say "David Lynch". It is the first time it was mentioned in the actual article. See WP:MOS.
 * Got it. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Background: "television series" mystery series?
 * Don't know if that flows so well; given that everything else is about film I think "television" is necessary here. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Most refs are missing publishers
 * Got them. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Small, but solid. That's all from me. On hold. TBrandley 17:01, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Addressed or replied to everything listed. Now to actually read that bloody script. GRAPPLE   X  00:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I read it. I just didn't find anything issues. Sorry for not clarifying. The article appears good now. Pass. TBrandley 00:09, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * No, I mean I need to read the actual Ronnie Rocket script, I found a copy online but I haven't got round to it yet. GRAPPLE   X  00:12, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, okay. Cool. TBrandley 00:15, 29 August 2012 (UTC)