Talk:Roosevelt Jones/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * NBA Gatorade League should be just NBA G League
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:04, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Wikilink college basketball, Rivals.com
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:08, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Rebounds should be linked to Rebound (basketball)
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:11, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "and committed to Butler." - and committed to playing for Buller
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:13, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

Early life

 * "he couldn't get his shot off " - could not; try to avoid quotations outside of quotes
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:14, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "In eight grade," - eighth
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:17, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "leader on a 14-15 team." - 14–15 team; also an en dash should be used in place for an hyphen for all respective game scores after this one
 * I think I got them all. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:43, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Southeastern Conference to Southwestern Athletic Conference and Rivals to Rivals.com
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:44, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "but he didn't notice Jones's poor shooting style due to his athleticism." - did not
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:45, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

College career

 * "Jones tallied a season-high 17 points to go with 10 rebounds." - remove "to go"
 * Changed to "Jones tallied a season-high 17 points as well as 10 rebounds." ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:46, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "Jones averaged 7.8 points and a team high" - team-high
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:50, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Link layup
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:52, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "Jones had 23 points in Butler's 67-64 loss to Notre Dame in the NCAA Tournament despite" - wikilink NCAA Tournament to 2015 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:53, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "and rarely shooting outside 15 feet." - use the convert template on 15 feet
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:55, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "he hit a last-second shot to defeat 17th ranked Cincinnati ater" - after
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:56, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Blowout to Blowout (sports)
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:57, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "Jones earned a bachelor of arts degrees" - remove "a"
 * I'm not so sure about this... my phrasing seems correct. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:57, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

Reference

 * Ref 24 is dead and requires archiving
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 01:00, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Refs 30 and 34 are lacking the author
 * Good catch. Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 01:02, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

That's all the nibbles I found. Going to be putting this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:48, 9 June 2018 (UTC)