Talk:Rosa Diaz/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vortex3427 (talk · contribs) 05:48, 12 December 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this.
 * Thanks, @Vortex3427! What's been happening with this review so far? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:06, 27 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Sorry, I completely forgot about this. I'll start this soon. — V ORTEX  3427 (Talk!) 07:08, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright, starting.
 * Sources are all reliable.
 * created for her instead... Add ref 2 to the end of this sentence. Additionally, ref 1 says that Linetti auditioned for Diaz, not when she was named Megan.
 * with the Chicago Tribune remarking that she was "beyond thrilled". Is the attribution needed here. They're interviewing her in this article; it's safe to assume the information directly came from her.
 * Link first instance of Latina (not as known outside US) and Straight man.
 * She also frequently is shown to have anger management issues; This is directly mentioned in the NY Times source
 * — V ORTEX  3427 (Talk!) 07:54, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Responses:
 * Not sure why ref 2 needs to be added? Also, That's likely just retconning on the part of hollywood.com – Rosa wasn't named Rosa until after Beatriz was cast for the part (Lange 2015).
 * It's pretty flowery, i just cut it in a merge of the two sentences.
 * Linked!
 * I'm hesitant to lay down the personality traits of a character in wikivoice; better to hedge a bit.
 * theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 23:10, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
 * 1. To support initially created under the name "Megan"...
 * 4. The She also frequently is shown to have anger management issues; is already in the article, but is supported by the GQ source. The NY Times article uses the exact words "anger management".
 * "beating the crap out of the ballerinas" I think this is the exact quote from the show, but the NY Times says instead "beating up the ballerinas"
 * carried emotional Carried more emotional
 * Palmer Haasch with Polygon reported that Rosa's declaration, "I'm bi", was the first time the phrase had been used on network television. Haash also reported that this was not true: This part was... confusing. Reading the article, it says that co-creator Dan Goor was the one who claimed that the phrase was the first time it'd been used on network tv.
 * Link first instance of Chicago Tribune and "first episode" to New Captain
 * @Theleekycauldron: Anyway, that's it! Sorry for the... two-week long wait. — V ORTEX  3427 (Talk!) 01:33, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
 * @Vortex3427: No worries! I think I've fixed it up now – I'd normally provide the diff, but I'm so tired :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 08:21, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Passing now... — V ORTEX  3427 (Talk!) 01:50, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Passing now... — V ORTEX  3427 (Talk!) 01:50, 29 December 2022 (UTC)