Talk:Rosario Cooper

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 September 2018 and 21 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Goldpothos.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:12, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Kat's Feedback
It's really admirable for you to take on making an entirely new wikipedia page for Rosario. I'm glad that your concerns about her notability seem to be somewhat unfounded as it looks like you've already found a decent amount of information delineating her accomplishments. My main suggestion would be to see if there's a way you could go into specifics about the "place names, songs, and cultural knowledge" that she was able to salvage (references permitting, of course). I find that that may be a good way to highlight some achievements & knowledge that may not normally be highlighted while still maintaining wikipedia's codes of neutrality. ALSO doubled check your "born" and "died" dates in the sidebox as I think you may have a typo. Another point of interest is your "Work with J.P Harrington" section, I'd be careful not to highlight his contributions over Rosario's (esp. since he already has his own page) and if you could find specifics about the processes used to reconstruct the language that would greatly increase the quality of your article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kmpresto (talk • contribs) 00:46, 14 November 2018 (UTC)

possible new photos to upload to article
need to check if they meet Wikipedia's criteria upload using wikimedia commons https://calisphere.org/item/dcafc2b31f28e569b7d9571de053ae5d/ https://calisphere.org/item/ark:/13030/c870806d/

--Goldpothos (talk) 22:00, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

my goals for this article
main goal: to create a Wikipedia page for Rosario Cooper (and submit it and have it hopefully get permission to publish)


 * synthesize information about Rosario from other sources
 * add photographs of Rosario to article (emailed Ian about that)
 * link to other related pages (chumash people, chumash language)
 * add to related WikiProjects

article goals:
 * figure out how to add in photos
 * see if I can find JP Harrington's feildnotes working with Rosario to include in article?
 * create a strong lead section
 * include sub-sections (early life/life, work with anthropologist JP Harrington, legacy)
 * fill out the infobox template with info and picture

outside the article:
 * link my article to other related articles
 * add my article to related WikiProjects
 * find another article where I can include information about Rosario (like the Chumash people "notable people" section)

reference article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Yee

overall reminder: follow Wikipedia's guidelines!! and format!! https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/e9/Editing_Wikipedia_Articles_Biographies.pdf https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/d2/Wiki_Education_Classroom_Program_example_grading_rubric.pdf https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/90/Editing_Wikipedia_brochure_%28Wiki_Education_Foundation%29_%282017%29.pdf#page=15

can i reach 1500 words for new article creation?

--Goldpothos (talk) 22:59, 1 November 2018 (UTC)goldpothos

WGS/ES article exercises
Goldpothos (talk) 06:13, 7 November 2018 (UTC)

my response to peer review: haha yes I did mess up the dates, so I need to fix that! and yes I intend to go into more detail in the work section, I just haven't had time yet Goldpothos (talk) 04:47, 14 November 2018 (UTC)

Edits as of 11/18/18 (edits/exercise 12 as of 11/29)

I moved article to mainspace, but still need to:
 * clean up the songs/wax cylinders information in the Work section (done)
 * research whether the Northern Chumash language is considered extinct/endangered and whether the Tribe has anyone who speaks it now? (done)
 * waiting for email back about use/public domain of Rosario Cooper's photo to use in article
 * add to legacy section (done)
 * double check my references list (done)
 * add to related Wikipedia articles and WikiProjects (done)

Goldpothos (talk) 00:48, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

need to do some final touch ups
 * thinking of using native word "tilhini" instead of calling it the Northern Chumash language
 * my photo of Cooper got deleted to need to re-upload that

Goldpothos (talk) 22:48, 29 November 2018 (UTC)