Talk:Rosemary Edna Sinclair/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * Some close paraphrasing is possible
 * I have addressed the issue. Some of the sentences are in quotes and others pertain to titles or names
 * No dablinks or external link issue.


 * Early life and education
 * 12 year old Hyphens
 * Done


 * Personal life
 * Valentine's Day 1970 Let's give the plain date.
 * Added "14 February"


 * Thanks for the review. Addressed above issues in the article.  Nvvchar . 12:18, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the changes. This can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Nvvchar . 07:06, 23 June 2016 (UTC)