Talk:Rosia Bay

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I will be reverting the last seven edits from 18 September 2012. (I've never reverted an edit before, so hopefully it will go smoothly.) While the contributor surely acted in good faith, the division and rearrangement of the sections and paragraphs has resulted in a series of one and two-sentence paragraphs. The flow of the article has been interrupted. Example: the topics of the Victualling Yard and Rosia Cottages were closely related, yet they were separated in the revised version. Most important was the resultant apparent lack of sourcing. The division and rearrangement resulted in four paragraphs (excluding the lead) which either had no references or terminated in a sentence which was unreferenced. I submitted a DYK nomination for this article the previous day, on 17 September 2012. As the article currently exists, it does not meet DYK standards. However, I do plan on incorporating some of the contributor's suggestions into the article today. Anne (talk) 17:45, 19 September 2012 (UTC)