Talk:Ross Medical Education Center

Promotional Content
This does read as a self-written article. Promotional tone: difference between 'finally Ross univ did...' and 'Ross univ did' removes related-party context. Locations dont really read as descriptive information, and more like service-detail information- the kind of thing that would provided as part of the service via the site or company (akin to a store locator). Acquisition, mission statement, focus, history and goals seem like relevant static information to the company. An encyclopedic article should not be providing the specific 'run-time' details of the company like specific locations. A rough number, or ratio of US states seems to be generally acceptable. Colinrgodsey (talk) 00:30, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
 * We don't normally include mission statements or goals, as they usually read like something written by the public relations department, giving advert-like content without imparting any real information. See the essay Avoid mission statements for more details. — Diannaa (talk) 14:34, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
 * good point! Colinrgodsey (talk) 15:35, 3 June 2016 (UTC)