Talk:Round & Round (Selena Gomez & the Scene song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Plarem (talk · contribs) 20:13, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

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Discussion
Ask questions if there is a need for that. – Plarem (User talk contribs) 20:33, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

FAILED – Plarem (User talk contribs) 11:18, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Additional comments
Lead Reception Music video I would like to see these issues addressed before a reassessment is considered. Hekerui (talk) 20:51, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The lead sentence "critics taking note of the song's instant attraction beyond the expected demographic" is vague since the demographic is not mentioned.
 * "second highest charting single" "behind 'Who Says'" - the song did not chart behind the other song but later
 * according to whom did the single chart "moderately" in other countries? that sounds like original research
 * "The song's lyrics speak of a relationship going around in circles." - one can rephrase that image, it makes no sense as such
 * what is "the song's middle eight"? that should be explained when it comes up
 * "Kylie Minogue circa 2001" and "Kesha-esque" should be attributed, these are opinions and not matter-of-fact
 * "praised Gomez's vocal maturity and rock edge likely thanks to producer" - the sentence does not flow well, should be clarified, the reviewer thinks the "edge" is likely to the producer
 * the section uses many quotes whose ideas can be paraphrased in own words - we should try to minimize usage of copyrighted material
 * the use of non-intuitive piped linked is deprecated
 * wikilinks in quotes should be avoided per MOS:LINK - specifically the links to Miley Cyrus, Can't Be Tamed and Hilary Duff
 * "Propelled by a debut at number fifteen on the US Hot Digital Songs chart ..." - this suggests causality where none exists for effect, please use plain language
 * "The song performed moderately in international markets." - this statement is unsourced and sounds like original research, as mentioned above
 * "The filming of the video was made by Phillip Andelman..." - this is unclear, was he the director? if so, why not simply state that?
 * "donning spy apparel", "and other duties" - these statements are unclear/vague
 * the Nadine Cheung statement can be rephrased in one's own words and does not need to be copy-pasted in the article


 * I must thank-you for this review. I am sorry if I made any inconvenience. – Plarem (User talk contribs) 21:40, 20 December 2011 (UTC)