Talk:Roxen (singer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Am going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Early life and career

 * "Born in Cluj-Napoca on 5 January 2000 as Larisa Roxana Giurgiu," - more grammatically correct; Born Larisa Roxana Giurgiu on 5 January 2000 in Cluj-Napoca,
 * "was released in the November of the same year" - released later that year in November
 * "In an interview," - please state who conducted the interview
 * "she was revealed as the Romanian representative." - revealed by TVR
 * "were released on 21 February 2020." - I don't think the year is necessary here since it is already mentioned earlier in the paragraph
 * ""Alcohol You" emerged as the winner of the national final." - please state the date for clarity
 * Delink China per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "Although TVR had considered sending "Alcohol You" to participate in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021," - {{xt|retaining "Alcohol You" as a song for