Talk:Rudolf Wanderone/GA1

GA Review

 * This review is transcluded from Talk:Rudolf Wanderone Jr./GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * A supposed feud with Willie Mosconi is mentioned twice. The first time it is in quotes, suggesting that the feud was not as it appeared to be, but this is not explained.  The second mention is in "Resorts International Shoot-Out", where their singles match is described as having "made history".  Why exactly did it make history?
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * An excellent article that I will be happy to promote once the question of the feud is cleared up. Regards, Resolute 03:04, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The first mention of the feud is now sourced with a quote from Mosconi's widow. The "really made history" line I didn't write and I went ahead and deleted it since it doesn't really add anything to the article. Otto4711 (talk) 10:37, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Excellent, thanks! I believe this is now a GA. Resolute 15:27, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * An excellent article that I will be happy to promote once the question of the feud is cleared up. Regards, Resolute 03:04, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The first mention of the feud is now sourced with a quote from Mosconi's widow. The "really made history" line I didn't write and I went ahead and deleted it since it doesn't really add anything to the article. Otto4711 (talk) 10:37, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Excellent, thanks! I believe this is now a GA. Resolute 15:27, 12 July 2008 (UTC)