Talk:Rudyard Kipling (ship)

Copyediting
I saw in the GAN review that there's a possible MoS problem. The only thing I can find is that the lead should be shorter per WP:LEAD, and I made the edit. Feel free to revert. - Dank (push to talk) 21:29, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
 * I actually missed that. Thanks Dank :)-- White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 21:36, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Now that that has been fixed, I can pass this. Congratulations! ~  Nerdy Science  Dude  00:44, 6 September 2010 (UTC)