Talk:Runaway (Janet Jackson song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:56, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

I will get on with this today! --K. Peake 08:56, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "made available commercially as the album's" → "made available commercially as the"
 * ""Runaway" is a" → "it is a"
 * "in its composition." → "in the composition."
 * "The track received positive reviews" → "The song received positive reviews"
 * Only keep the Prince comparisons since no more than one review mentions the Supremes
 * "as well as with Jackson's" → "as well as with Janet Jackson's" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
 * "In the United States, it reached" → "In the US, it reached" per MOS:US
 * "An accompanying music video for the track was" → "An accompanying music video was", as this is implied
 * "most recently on second leg of the" → "most recently on the second leg of her"

Background

 * Img looks good!
 * Mention that Design of a Decade was released in 1995
 * "as well two new tracks," → "as well as two new tracks,"
 * "the past 10 years."" → "the past 10 years"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "duet with Jackson's brother" → "duet with Janet's brother" per MOS:SAMESURNAME, even though everyone knows who the second Jackson is anyway!
 * "of her past single" → "of Janet Jackson's past single" per above
 * "Deep Dish and Farley and Heller," → "Deep Dish, and Farley and Heller,"

Recording and composition

 * "Jam and Lewis also play" this sentence needs past/present tense throughout to be consistent
 * Audio sample looks good!
 * "Musically, it is a" → "Musically, "Runaway" is a"
 * "sitars" as well as Jackson's" → "sitars", and Jackson's"
 * MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section, i.e when there is punctuation inside speech marks and it is not a full sentence
 * "he also said that" → "he also said"
 * A misspelling is for cleveriy; check the source for this and if not use [] or [sic] to edit
 * "Freaky Trigger website observed that "this" → "Freaky Trigger website observed, "This" per this being a full sentence
 * "Australia and Mexico, while" → "Australia, and Mexico, while"
 * "she tries to convince him" → "Jackson tries to convince him"
 * "with the lyric," → "with the line,"
 * "Jam commented that the lyrics" change simply to the line if it is about this one line

Critical reception

 * "received generally positive reviews" → "was met with generally positive reviews"
 * "classified it as" → "handed the classification of"
 * MOS:QUOTE issues again in this section
 * "reworking of 'Escapade,'," why is there two commas when this is inside a quote?
 * Howard Cohen of The Miami Herald had" → "Howard Cohen of the Miami Herald had" with the wikilink
 * Remove repeated link to Michael Jackson
 * "Tirzah Agassi of Jerusalem Post wrote" → "Tirzah Agassi of The Jerusalem Post wrote" with the wikilink
 * "was "an innocuous trifle" → "is "an innocuous trifle"
 * "Paul Marsh from The San Francisco Examiner" → "Paul Marsh from the San Francisco Examiner" with the wikilink
 * "complementing that "if they were" → "complementing how "if they were"
 * "For Mark Brown from the Orange County Register," → "For Mark Brown from The Orange County Register," with the wikilink
 * "Andrew Hirst of" → "Andrew Hirst of the"

Commercial performance

 * Img looks good!
 * "In the United States, "Runaway"" → "In the US, "Runaway""
 * "of the chart twice" → "of the Hot 100 twice"
 * Mention the certification was in the US
 * "of the single" remove this part and instead mention in this sentence the certification was in Australia
 * For the other parts of Europe, why is it disordered in terms of positions from highest to lowest or the opposite?

Music video

 * Img looks good!
 * "The accompanying music video for "Runaway" was" → "The music video for "Runaway" was"
 * Pipe Van Nuys, California to Van Nuys
 * "on August 29, 1995 through" → "on August 29, 1995, through"
 * Pipe Seven Wonders of the World to Wonders of the World
 * "her dress and jewelry" remove in the video because this is implied
 * "in New York City." → "in New York City (NYC)." per this city being mentioned twice
 * Pipe Pyramids of Egypt to Egyptian pyramids
 * "in Rio de Janeiro, as well as the" → "in Rio de Janeiro, and the"
 * "classic Hollywood musicals."" → "classic Hollywood musicals"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "Los Angeles Times Lorraine Ali commented" → "The Los Angeles Times Lorraine Ali commented"

Live performances

 * Img looks good!
 * "on the setlist of her" → "on the setlist of Jackson's"
 * Start a new sentence at during the performance to avoid a run-on
 * "blow-up props", with the singer dressed" → "blow-up props" and the singer dressed"
 * Lowercase the Roots per MOS:THEMUSIC

Track listing

 * Pipe Heller & Farley to Fire Island (duo)

Credits and personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Weekly charts

 * Are you sure Cash Box shouldn't be in brackets instead?

Year-end charts

 * Good

Decade-end charts

 * Pipe Nielsen SoundScan to Luminate (company)

Certifications

 * Change caption to Certifications and sales for "Runaway"

Release history

 * Center the refs

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; took a couple of days for this! --K. Peake 10:56, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I think all of the issues have been addressed, thanks for your time reviewing this! Alex reach me! 16:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * This is almost there now, you just still need to fix MOS:QUOTE issues, such as "soon overtakes the mix."" --K. Peake 20:11, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I honestly get so confused about quotes, but I tried my best now. Alex reach me! 22:11, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, there were some MOS:QUOTE issues left but I fixed them and see the edit to understand more! --K. Peake 07:38, 5 August 2023 (UTC)