Talk:Rusmir Halilović

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This new article has some interesting content, but unfortunately also has a lot of WP:PEACOCK phrases, overly laudatory and subjective statements. Most of them are unsourced as well. I tried to start trimming, but failed due to lack of background knowledge. Someone more experienced needs to have a look here. Grammar and structure could use a bit of improvement too. GermanJoe (talk) 15:25, 31 January 2015 (UTC)