Talk:Russia in the Eurovision Song Contest 1995/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:32, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Time to get rid of this old nomination! --K. Peake 09:32, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The songwriters are not directly sourced anywhere in the body as they should be
 * Wikilink Philipp Kirkovov in the lead
 * "to select Russian entrant." → "to select the Russian entrant."
 * To avoid the lead being too cluttered, you should start a new para at Vocal Band
 * "due to the band members being" → "due to the members being"
 * Wikilink music video
 * I think it is worth noting that the placing was their worst result
 * Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Background

 * Introduce RTR and ORT by their full names per this being the first mentions in the body
 * "which will represent Russia" → "which would represent Russia"
 * Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Evrovidenie "Pesnya-95"

 * Wikilink Philipp Kirkorov on the img text
 * "jury came to" → "the jury came to"
 * Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Table looks good!

Internal selection

 * "due to the group's members inability" → "due to the members' inability"
 * Wikilink Philip Kirkorov
 * Wikilink music video
 * "to the public on 30 April 1995" → "to the public the next day"
 * Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

At Eurovision

 * Img looks good!
 * Pipe previous year's contest to Eurovision Song Contest 1994
 * "participation in 1994 contest" → "participation in the 1994 contest"
 * "didn't participate in 1994 contest." → "didn't participate in this contest."
 * "in 1994 contest," → "in the 1994 contest," but where is this 17 part sourced?
 * "Philipp Kirkorov took part in" → "Kirkorov took part in"
 * "on 8 and 10 May," → "on 8 and 10 May 1995,"
 * "wearing white shirt and" → "wearing a white shirt and"
 * "was the Russia's worst placing" → "was Russia's worst placing"
 * "had won the contest;" → "had emerged as winners;"
 * "the Russian singer."" only keep inside speech marks if this is a full sentence per MOS:QUOTE
 * Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Voting

 * "for 1995 contest," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 1995," since this is a new sub section
 * "to the ten highest-ranking songs" → "to the 10 highest-ranking songs" per MOS:NUM
 * "assembled 16-member jury panel," → "assembled a 16-member jury panel,"
 * Pipe Lora Kvint to Квинт, Лора Геннадьевна
 * Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Table looks good!

Final comments and verdict
K. Peake, I've made almost all the changes you've requested. Only I had one question (added above). Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * until all of the issues are fixed; this should not take very long! --K. Peake 17:14, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Pinging the nominator:, since this article has not been change since this review has been on hold for 6 days now. —  VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 20:24, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
 * MOS:QWQ issues are when you have used double speech marks inside reference titles; replace with singular ones ('). --K. Peake 15:17, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

K. Peake: Done - Danilmay (talk) 17:55, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, this is totally fine! --K. Peake 19:16, 8 August 2023 (UTC)