Talk:Russian cruiser Admiral Makarov/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 15:37, 2 December 2011 (UTC)


 * One dab link. Please fix.
 * That's in the hat note; I'm not sure how to fix it since it covers ships and people both.
 * The infobox and the text indicate different speeds for the ship.
 * Clarified; I only use designed speed in infoboxes as trial speeds are rarely reached during active service.
 * "She was modified to lay mines shortly after the war began and laid mines herself and provided cover for other ships laying minefields." - redundant in that "mines" is used 3 times.
 * Split into two sentences.
 * "The following year, the ship was one of a group of cruisers that visited Brest, France, the Isle of Portland in Great Britain, and Stavanger, Norway." - elaborate the purpose of these visits.
 * Can't; my sources don't specify. But I suspect that it was the usual flag-showing.
 * Gardener and Gray reference is not used in the footnotes.
 * Cite added.
 * More small fixes. — Ed! (talk) 15:37, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:03, 2 December 2011 (UTC)