Talk:Russian frigate General Admiral/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 16:01, 19 July 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * There's a lot of "en route"s in the article. Can you mix up the wording a bit?
 * Can you play with the ship template for Pervenetz so just the ship's name is the link? Red links are fine, but that looks pretty ugly right now.
 * Done and done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:54, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Better now. Parsecboy (talk) 19:20, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * I know this is a pretty obscure ship, but right now you've only used one source. Is there any mention of the ship in old naval annuals or the like? Note: I removed Conways from the reference list as it wasn't being used in the article.
 * Found one reference in the Times of note. Being scrapped in 1870 she predates just about every naval annual, etc.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:54, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I thought as much, though I have seen articles in some of those periodicals about Civil War-era ships (can't think of any examples, but I've seen them while trawling for images). Parsecboy (talk) 19:20, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * There's not much holding this up, nice work as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 16:10, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 19:20, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * There's not much holding this up, nice work as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 16:10, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 19:20, 19 July 2010 (UTC)