Talk:Russian ironclad Sevastopol/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 00:31, 28 June 2013 (UTC)

Review
 * The toolbox checks out.
 * "an 32-gun": a 32-gun
 * "; four on the upper deck as chase guns and 28 on the lower deck.": sentence fragment; change the semicolon to a comma
 * "two gun": two guns
 * "her armament was changed again and now consisted of fourteen": "... changed again, to fourteen".
 * I didn't like the comma after again and went with: "In 1877, her armament was changed again to 14 eight-inch guns".
 * "that reduced": "reduced" isn't impossible in this sense, but it's a little uncomfortable. How about "that narrowed"?
 * "All dates used in this article are Old Style": period needed.
 * "Robert Gardiner": "Gardiner, Robert"
 * Otherwise:
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * - Dank (push to talk) 00:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * - Dank (push to talk) 00:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
 * - Dank (push to talk) 00:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)

All done, thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:43, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 20:47, 29 June 2013 (UTC)