Talk:Russian monitor Lava/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 18:50, 15 September 2014 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * Right now, it reads as though the 5-inch armored ring was installed on Latnik, not Lava
 * One dupe link
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Lava was present during a visit of an American squadron in 1867: see here and here
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * It'd be nice to get a line drawing but Brassey's and Jane's don't normally include them for smaller ships, so oh well.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * It'd be nice to get a line drawing but Brassey's and Jane's don't normally include them for smaller ships, so oh well.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Thanks for finding the bit about the American visit and catching the small errors. All done now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:15, 16 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Great work as usual, passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 20:12, 16 September 2014 (UTC)