Talk:Russian monitor Uragan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)


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 * Images are properly licensed ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Copyvio ✅
 * No dead links ✅

Prose suggestions

 * "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), one of the faster ships in her class." Perhaps "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), making her one of the faster ships in her class."
 * Good idea.
 * " but Uragan was modified for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage." Somewhat confusing perhaps: "but Uragan was modified, so as to be ready for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage."
 * I used slightly different wording, but your idea is sound.
 * That is all. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  03:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:21, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * All is good, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  21:37, 28 March 2017 (UTC)