Talk:Russian submarine K-114 Tula/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun ( talk · contribs) 09:55, 1 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Note: Since most sources are in Russian, I am using Google translate for spotchecks. Please include the language parameter where needed. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 10:02, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

Prose

 * she carries - are submarines females? I thought we apply such subjects only in French language.
 * Ships and boats are referred to as she. Search for "she" here and here read this. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 10:46, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 11:02, 1 January 2012 (UTC)


 * her during Tula's later operational life - Replace Tula's with her. The sentence is short and can be easily understood.
 * Done. ✅


 * She also equipped with - Something missing?
 * Done. ✅

>Really impressive though a short article. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 10:33, 1 January 2012 (UTC)