Talk:Ruth Archer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:20, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 15:20, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

I have added all my comments: Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 06:52, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Ruth Archer (previously Pritchard) I think this should read better as "Ruth Archer (née Pritchard)"
 * I've changed it to "Ruth Archer (also Pritchard)" as fictional characters are created and not born. There's been a big thing at WP:SOAPS about it, and I believe "also" was the compromise. - JuneGloom07    Talk  02:25, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I assume there is no link for Felicity Finch? Can we add "actress" and her nationality? ✅
 * She made her debut in the 15 July 1987 episode broadcast. I think ""broadcast" may be omitted ✅
 * Can Liz Rigbey be linked? Don't if this is to be a redlink.
 * No article I'm afraid. - JuneGloom07    Talk  02:25, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
 * strong willed Should there not be a dash in between? ✅

Creation and casting

 * Instead of adding the Smethurst citation to the end of each of the first few lines of the section, you can simply add it to the end of the last line it supports.
 * I think I've done this right. - JuneGloom07    Talk  02:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Can you add who exactly Smethurst is? Author? Critic? ✅
 * Link "love interest" as you have in the lead ✅
 * "Scottish" may be linked ✅

Characterisation

 * "feminist" may be linked ✅
 * authors of The Archers Archives opined  "Archives, opined" ✅

Marriage to David Archer

 * and were well suited Should it not be "well-suited"? ✅

Breast cancer

 * I may be good to expand "GP" ✅
 * Can "Chemotherapy" be linked? ✅
 * her system would still contain toxic drugs Wouldn't "body" sound better than "system"? ✅

Reception

 * While Rachel Cooke from the New Statesman was not a fan of the character at all, writing "Ruth bores me to sobs, so I didn't give a fig that this was out of character." I think "while" makes the sentence sound incomplete ✅
 * The last two paras of "Near affair with Sam Batton" may be shifted to Reception, perhaps under a subsection. ✅

In popular culture and other media

 * Can "Rwanda" be linked? ✅

That should be all. These done, I would be glad to promote this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 06:52, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

You there? Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:46, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Sainsf, I'm so sorry! I totally missed this. My watchlist has been a little crazy over the past few days and this slipped through the net. I'll start working on it ASAP. - JuneGloom07    Talk  15:53, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi, I believe I've worked through all of the points you raised. Thank you for the review and your patience! - JuneGloom07    Talk  02:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, you have been great in your response. I am sure this splendid article meets all the GA criteria now. Really happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 03:56, 7 April 2016 (UTC)