Talk:Ruyter Suys

Clean up of listed multiple issues
I have started to clean this article up but will need more assistance if it is to get to a higher standard. To assist others who may also wish to clean it up I am listing each area of concern below and outlining what I have done so far. Jemmaca (talk) 03:48, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Integration
I have added links to locations and other artists mentioned in article. I think this ought to be enough to meet that concern and if another editor agrees I suggest removing that issue from the list.Jemmaca (talk) 03:48, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Unsourced information
It was almost entirely unclear where most information came from and so I removed all of the existing Early Life material and rewrote it. I tried to keep as much information as I could but using the limited references I could find that did not just appear to be using wikipedia as its source. I have removed information I believe to be accurate but for which I could find no source. Jemmaca (talk) 03:48, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Self published sources
In fact the 2 references given before were not self published. But many of the external links are. This gives the impression that the article relies on such sources. Of the 2 sources I added one is definitely self published. As it was from an interview with Ms Suys and the information is not contentious or damaging in any way I hope this will suffice for now.

I am unsure about the suitability of leaving the links to the external sources. But as I have no specific reason to remove them at this time I have refrained from removing them.Jemmaca (talk) 03:48, 8 January 2013 (UTC)