Talk:Ryan Johansen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: KnowIG (talk) 21:36, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Might as well do this as well. Will be done by tomorrow night.

What is triple A and Double A. I get their grades of teams but what are the differences etc. Following on what is Bantarn meaning in terms of standered etc. Link or explain. Peewee. Now I know what that means but for everyone's sake who is not North American maybe in brackets write childrens team. Possibley merge the first and second together of the playing career section as What you've written flows but would flow better as one paragraph. Nice little article not a lot to say just have to finish off tomorrow. KnowIG (talk) 23:56, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Columbus to a three-year. on a instead of to.
 * "to" is correct usage. Players are always signed to a contract with a team, or signed with a team to a contract.  On (ex. signed to a contract with team on a blank year deal), at least in Canada/North American media, is almost never used to describe a signing.  Ravendrop 06:14, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not North American....It looks wrong to me. lol KnowIG (talk) 17:29, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

top-20 pick, perhaps as high as top-10. Rm hyphans.

Attending his first NHL training camp that month, he was later returned to Portland on October 2 for another year of junior. Incomplete sentence. Should end junior hockey. But the first bit is weak as well. But I'll leave it to you to improve.

Place link on the award and find career stats to reference that section.

Right I'm done. However it is a little stubby so I will ask for another view point. Particually if you take the draft stuff out all the maybe and what nots it's very much a stub so I will check. If its ok and you do the improvements on here then great, I will pass. If not wait for his career to develop further before going for GA. KnowIG (talk) 21:24, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed the above issues. Let me know if there's anything else I can do and I'll wait for the second opinion. Thanks ! Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 23:45, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Couple of things to add later. But once you've done them we are good to promote, as I now have confirmation. KnowIG (talk) 09:28, 8 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you please define Triple A and double A what's the difference please state. This suggestion is not by me. Try your best here He was offered a full scholarship to play college hockey with Northeastern University but later chose to play in the Western Hockey League (WHL) instead, costing him his eligibility to play for a National Collegiate Athletic Association school. Poorl;y written. and $1.975 per year if he reaches all his. Needs million added. KnowIG (talk) 21:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up the sentence regarding NCAA eligibility and explained AAA and AA hockey with a footnote. Let me know if there's anything else I can do. Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 09:36, 14 March 2011 (UTC)