Talk:Ryan Kesler/GA1

GA Review
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--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 19:59, 19 February 2009 (UTC)


 * I have addressed your concerns. Just a couple of specifics:
 * "He scored his first NHL goal five nights later against the Calgary Flames' Jamie McLennan" and "When NHL play resumed for the 2005–06 NHL season, Kesler joined the Canucks for his first full season with the team" - I changed both of these sentences to try and clarify them. Let me know what you think, or if you have any suggestions to improve them further.
 * "After originally escaping punishment" - Expanded this sentence to clarify that the NHL announced he would not receive a suspension, but later suspended him when new video emerged.
 * Please let me know if you have any other concerns. Thanks for the review! – Nurmsook!  talk...  20:28, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Check (on all of the above). Thank you to Nurmsook for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:02, 19 February 2009 (UTC)