Talk:S&M (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CallMe Nathan   &bull;  Talk2Me   07:33, 31 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I am sorry to report that this article is being failed. It has been unfortunately been nominated very prematurely, and should be copy-edited and completely re-done. I will list several outstanding issues (of many).


 * Prose are fairly poor. ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "Musically, the song derives genres"? ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "The lyrics of the song see Rihanna declaring her fetishes." ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "The song charted successfully" ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "punishing the members of the media who have hurt her, including gossip blogger Perez Hilton" How so? ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)


 * MoS
 * Awkward paragraphing throughout ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Content
 * The article is running fairly short on info for the "Background" section. For a song this popular, and that was famously remixed after its release, it could have a much more developed section. ✅ calvin999 (talk) 18:52, 6 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Sources - this section is, forgive me, disastrous
 * Several, several un-reliable sources, not properly formatted refs etc. This section needs a lot of work.


 * This article is being failed, but nice work so far. I hope to see it re-nominated soon after being thoroughly fixed. Good luck!-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   07:43, 31 May 2011 (UTC)