Talk:São Tomé and Príncipe at the 1996 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 29 August 2018 (UTC)

Hi ! I am going to review this article as well. I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 15:49, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Copyedit
 * Here is my copyedit. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 15:52, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Prose & MOS
 * Per MOS:DUPLINK, I would remove at least the last instance in the prose of the linking to Sortelina Pires and Odair Baia. Since the article is so short, I would probably just link in the lead and the table.
 * All other prose looks good. Pretty short and succinct. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 15:58, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Images
 * No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 15:49, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * References
 * Are there any other references you can include? The article relies almost completely on one source (Sports Reference).
 * I've added citations to the official report, though the reality is SR is a much easier version of the same data to navigate and read. Courcelles (talk) 22:49, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
 * You archived all of the citations, even though all the pages are live? Is there a reason why?
 * The SR website has a giant notice on the top of it that it'll be closing "soon". Courcelles (talk) 22:49, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
 * All other references, formatting, and inline locations look good. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 15:58, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Overall
 * Overall, the article is short and concise on a fiarly limited topic. Nice work, again! « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 15:59, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Responded inline, . Courcelles (talk) 22:49, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 00:36, 3 September 2018 (UTC)