Talk:SANCCOB

Wiki Education assignment: ENGW3303 Adv. Writing for the Environmental Professions
— Assignment last updated by WritingTeacherC (talk) 18:11, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I completed a peer review following the WikiEd rubric. Your lead section follows the rubric nicely, as it is concise but informative. The only section that isn't explicitly referenced in the lead paragraph is the activities, but it does not detract from the understanding of the lead section. The tone and organization are following Wikipedia's guidelines. The content area present is highly relevant, but I would have liked to see more detail on exactly how they conserve the penguins and potentially some historically relevant large-scale rescues. I understand that these topics may not be available in literature yet. The sources references are of high quality, but my main concern is how little in-text citations there are. While sources 2 and 3 are at the end and signify the whole paragraph is cited using that source, 1 is in the middle of a paragraph, which seems to leave the rest of the paragraph un-cited. I admittedly couldn't figure out exactly what parts you added and what was already present, so some of this may have been outside of your scope of work. This article is really great! Egb27 (talk) 13:13, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

Partnerships and collaborations Table
I added a link to the table on the model of the AZA article. KennSimm (talk) 18:19, 12 April 2024 (UTC)