Talk:SAS President Pretorius/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)

Well constructed, will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Section 1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and links in right place.


 * Section 1; para 2; plated over to form a small flight deck; Is it a "flight deck" or "helipad"? The changes were to employ a helicopter right? I forgot to ask this in Steyn's review.
 * My sources generally call it a flight deck, but they're essentially syonymous when only a helicopter can be used.
 * Section 2; para 1; A comma after 21 November 1960
 * No, it's not a separate clause.
 * Section 2; para 1; Mention General Pieter Grobbelaar's position, for better understanding. Army chief I think so.
 * Good idea.
 * Section 2; para 3; the ship laid up on -> the ship was laid up on
 * Indeed.
 * Section 2; para 3; President Pretorius formally decommissioned on 11 May 1971 -> President Pretorius was formally decommissioned on 11 May 1971


 * Section 2; para 3; Plans to reactive and modernise, I think it must be "Plans to reactivate"


 * Section 2; para 3; shortages of money prevent them from being realized; "prevented"
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:50, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I knew what I meant to say, just couldn't put it down properly, I guess. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:47, 30 November 2016 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 12:12, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 12:12, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 12:12, 2 December 2016 (UTC)