Talk:SC Veendam/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:10, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have on a quick read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:14, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Look-Out" etc, all other names are usually put in bold with a redirect created to this article.
 * Done
 * "was founder member" a founder member.
 * Done
 * "the Eerste Klasse Noord" you'll need to tell us what that is.
 * Expanded a bit
 * "partook" took part
 * Done
 * "home stadion" stadium.
 * Done
 * "other juveniles from" young players?
 * Done
 * "finished 7th out of 7 sides" -> "bottom of the league of seven teams in their inaugural season".
 * Done
 * Why were the Netherlands playing an English club team?  Was it some kind of exhibition match??
 * It was; added
 * "players earned 15 guilders per win, 10 per draw and 5 per loss" convert to a more  recognisable  currency  and inflate.
 * Done
 * The article suffers a bit from recentism. All three history sections are roughly the same size yet the first section covers 66 years, the second 35  and the third 18.   Needs more balance.
 * A bit of a cheap trick but I amended the year ranges in the headings; the second and third sections have about the same year spans now. Overall, the emphasis lays of course a bit more on the club's heyday during the 1980s and the situation in the 2010s.
 * "local DWM factory" what was made there?
 * Added
 * "eliminated on aggregate" did they play in a two-legged tie then?
 * Yes; Veendam won 2–1 at home but lost 3–0 in the return match
 * "of €3,2 million" 3.2
 * Done
 * "The club dissolved" was dissolved.
 * Done
 * "reconstruction of " made by instead of "of"?
 * Done
 * "badges throughout their history" but you only mention the 2011 one?
 * The refs (at least the ones I have) do not exactly reflect what the former badges did look like, but I added some info about the one used from 1997 to 2011.
 * "a blue calotte which" that's a dab link.
 * Fixed
 * ""for a fee of €3,2 million.[23]" didn't you already say this?
 * Shortened
 * In Honours, "Eerste Klasse Noord" is overlinked.
 * Fixed
 * Hi, thanks for the review. I've addressed your comments. WA8MTWAYC (talk) 18:06, 17 September 2021 (UTC)