Talk:SL79/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 00:54, 20 November 2009 (UTC) Comments: I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 00:54, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The sentence "The trams can seat 77 passengers, with an additional 91 people able to stand, with seating three and four abreast." sounds fragmented and needs to be reworded.
 * 2) "Trams no. 101 through 113 was put into service" sounds awkward.
 * 3) Combine the sentences "The first vehicle was delivered on 4 August 1989 and was taken into service on 11 October. The last was put into service on 27 August 1990."
 * 4) Remove comma and the word "so" in sentence "Series two was delivered with vandal-proof seats, that proved so uncomfortable that they quickly were replaced."
 * 5) The entire article relies on only three references. Are there any other additional references that can be added?
 * Thanks for the review. I added a few more sources, but the three existing articles are about as reliable as it gets (two featured articles in a magazine plus the actual delivery brochure from the manufacturer). Arsenikk (talk)  12:35, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 16:33, 20 November 2009 (UTC)